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# U26 L2 剧本初稿 — Bingo Is Not Hungry
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**知识点：**
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- 单词：forty, hungry, thirsty, tired
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- 句型：Do you feel... (hungry/thirsty/tired)? / He is/isn't... (hungry/thirsty/tired).
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**角色：** User, Vicky, Bingo, Sam（短暂出现）, Sally（电话/视频）
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## 【起】抵达沙漠镇 — Bingo倒地
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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|------|---------|--------|---------|
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| TL | 【场景】沙漠镇广场【角色】User, Vicky, Bingo | | |
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| | User和Vicky走在沙漠镇的街道上，阳光很强烈 | | |
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| | | Vicky | So hot here. |
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| | | User | I feel so tired. |
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| | | Vicky | Me too. And thirsty. |
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| | User转头看向Bingo | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | Do you feel tired, Bingo? |
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| | 没有回应。User和Vicky对视一眼，一转头—— | | |
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| | Bingo已经面朝下倒在地上！【emoji】惊讶 | | |
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| | | User | Bingo!!! |
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| | | Vicky | Oh no! |
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| | User和Vicky连忙跑过去扶起Bingo | | |
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| | Bingo半睁着眼，头耷拉着，一点精神都没有 | | |
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| | | Bingo | I... feel... empty... |
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| | | User | Empty? |
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| 中互动 | | User | He is so tired! |
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| | | Vicky | Let him rest. |
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| | User和Vicky扶Bingo坐到路边的长椅上 | | |
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| | Bingo的声音慢吞吞的，像快没电的玩具 | | |
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| | | Bingo | Something... is missing... |
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| | | Vicky | Missing? |
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| | | Bingo | Inside me... nothing... |
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| | Vicky思考了一下【emoji】灯泡 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Maybe he is hungry! |
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| | | User | Hungry? |
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| | Vicky指向前方不远处的甜味烘焙坊 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Look! A bakery! |
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| 中互动 | | User | It's only forty steps away! |
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| | | Vicky | Let's go! |
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| | User和Vicky架着Bingo往烘焙坊走去 | | |
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## 【承】甜品区 — 甜甜圈风波
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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|------|---------|--------|---------|
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| TL | 【场景】甜味烘焙坊（内部-甜品区）【角色】User, Vicky, Bingo, Sam | | |
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| | 烘焙坊门口挂着大横幅："自助餐活动！" | | |
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| | Sam站在入口处 | | |
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| | | Sam | Welcome! All you can eat! |
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| | | Sam | Forty coins to get in. |
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| | | Vicky | Forty coins. Got it. |
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| 中互动 | | User | Forty coins for all of us! |
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| | Sam收了钱，让他们进去 | | |
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| | | Sam | Enjoy! |
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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|------|---------|--------|---------|
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| | 转场 | | |
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| TL | 甜品区，各种蛋糕、面包、甜甜圈摆满桌子 | | |
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| | User和Vicky开始挑选食物 | | |
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| | Bingo拿起一个甜甜圈，翻来覆去看了看——然后套在了手腕上！ | | |
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| | | Bingo | Pretty ring! |
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| | | User | That's not a ring! |
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| | 【emoji】流汗 | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | Are you really hungry? |
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| | | Bingo | What is... hungry? |
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| | | User | You feel empty inside. |
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| | | Bingo | Yes! Empty! |
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| | | User | That is hungry. Eat this! |
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| | | Bingo | Eat...? |
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| | Vicky拿起一个甜甜圈咬了一大口，示范给Bingo看 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Like this! Yum! |
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| | Bingo学着Vicky的样子，开始一个一个往嘴里塞甜甜圈 | | |
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| | 【spine动画】Bingo嘴巴大张，甜甜圈一个接一个消失 | | |
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| | | Vicky | One, two, three... |
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| | | User | He ate so many! |
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| | 甜甜圈越来越少——整盘都快被吃完了！ | | |
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| | | Vicky | He ate forty! |
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| 中互动 | | User | He must be really hungry! |
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| | Bingo停了一下，嘴巴鼓鼓的 | | |
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| | | User | Do you feel hungry now? |
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| | Bingo想开口回答——【音效】噗噗噗！甜甜圈一个一个从嘴里飞出来！ | | |
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| | 【spine动画】甜甜圈弹射出Bingo的嘴巴，到处乱飞 | | |
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| | 【emoji】惊讶 | | |
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| | | Bingo | Ahh...! |
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| | Bingo头顶开始冒烟【emoji】热浪 | | |
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| | | Bingo | I don't want food... |
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| | | Bingo | But I still feel bad... |
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| 中互动 | | User | He isn't hungry... |
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| | | Vicky | Hmm... |
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| | Vicky看着冒烟的Bingo，再看看旁边的饮品区 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Maybe he is thirsty? |
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| 中互动 | | User | Do you feel thirsty? |
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| | | Bingo | Thirsty...? |
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| | | Vicky | Let's get water! |
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## 【转】饮品区 — 喷泉Bingo + 真相揭露
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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|------|---------|--------|---------|
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| TL | 【场景】甜味烘焙坊（内部-饮品区）【角色】User, Vicky, Bingo | | |
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| | 饮品区有两个大水桶，上面贴着温度标签 | | |
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| | User接了一杯水递给Bingo | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | Drink it. You won't feel thirsty. |
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| | Bingo接过水杯，咕噜咕噜一口气喝完 | | |
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| | 【音效】咕噜咕噜 | | |
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| | Bingo头顶又冒起了烟【emoji】热浪 | | |
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| | | Bingo | Hot! Hot! Hot! |
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| | Vicky注意到水桶上的标签——100°！ | | |
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| | | Vicky | Wait! That says 100! |
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| | 【emoji】惊讶 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Too hot! Danger! |
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| | | User | Oh no! |
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| | User赶紧看另一个水桶——上面写着40° | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | This one! Forty degrees! |
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| | User从forty度的水桶接了一杯递给Bingo | | |
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| | Bingo接过来，又开始咕噜咕噜喝 | | |
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| | 【音效】咕噜咕噜咕噜—— | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | He is so thirsty! |
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| | Bingo一杯接一杯地喝，停不下来 | | |
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| | 突然——【音效】噗嗤！！ | | |
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| | 水从Bingo的两只耳朵里喷了出来！像两个小喷泉！ | | |
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| | 【spine动画】Bingo耳朵喷水，水花四溅 | | |
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| | 【emoji】惊讶 | | |
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| | | Vicky | He is a fountain!!! |
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| | | User | Bingo!!! |
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| | Bingo晃了两下，直接倒地！ | | |
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| | | User | Oh no! Not again! |
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| 中互动 | | User | Is he still tired? |
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| | User和Vicky连忙上前查看 | | |
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| | 这时，Bingo胸前的爱心标志开始一闪一闪 | | |
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| | 爱心上浮现出一个微弱的数字——**40%** | | |
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| | | Vicky | Look! His heart! |
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| | | User | Forty... percent? |
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| | | Vicky | Like a... battery? |
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| | User和Vicky面面相觑【emoji】问号x3 | | |
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| 中互动 | | User | He isn't tired... He isn't hungry... |
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| | | Vicky | Call Sally. Now. |
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| | User拿出通讯设备，拨通Sally的电话 | | |
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| | 【音效】电话拨号声——接通 | | |
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| | | Sally | What's up, kid? |
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| | | User | Bingo fell down again! |
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| | | Sally | Again? Tell me more. |
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## 【合】核心互动 + 结尾
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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| 核心互动 | 【口语：和Sally说明Bingo的情况】User看图回答Sally的提问，说明Bingo经历的症状。3轮对话。Sally每次提问，User看图选择/说出对应的回答（覆盖tired, hungry, thirsty + forty）。详见核心互动设计表。 | | |
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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| TL | Sally听完后沉默了一下 | | |
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| | | Sally | Kid. Listen. |
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| | | Sally | Bingo is not human. |
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| | | User | What?! |
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| | | Sally | He is a robot. |
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| | 【emoji】惊讶 | | |
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| | | Vicky | A robot...?! |
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| | | Sally | Bring him here. Now. |
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| | | Sally | To Pioneer House. |
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| 中互动 | | User | He isn't tired or hungry! |
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| | | Vicky | He needs power! |
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| | | User | Let's go! |
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| | User和Vicky小心翼翼地扶起Bingo | | |
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| | Bingo胸前的40%在微微闪烁 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Hold on, Bingo. |
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| | | Bingo | ... |
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| | User和Vicky带着Bingo，朝开拓者公寓跑去 | | |
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## 知识点统计
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### 单词输出次数（中互动中User台词）
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| 知识点 | 起 | 承 | 转 | 合 | 总输出 |
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| tired | 2（Do you feel tired / He is so tired） | 0 | 1（Is he still tired?） | 1（He isn't tired...） | 4 |
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| hungry | 0 | 3（Are you really hungry / He must be really hungry / He isn't hungry） | 0 | 1（...or hungry） | 4 |
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| thirsty | 0 | 1（Do you feel thirsty） | 2（You won't feel thirsty / He is so thirsty） | 0 | 3 |
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| forty | 1（forty steps） | 1（Forty coins for all of us） | 2（Forty degrees / Forty percent?...仅TL非互动） | 0 | 2-3 |
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### 句型输出次数
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| 句型 | 出现位置 |
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| Do you feel tired? | 起-中互动1 |
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| Do you feel hungry? (implied: Are you really hungry?) | 承-中互动 |
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| Do you feel thirsty? | 承-中互动 |
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| He is so tired! | 起-中互动2 |
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| He must be really hungry! | 承-中互动 |
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| He is so thirsty! | 转-中互动 |
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| He isn't hungry... | 承-中互动 |
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| He isn't tired... He isn't hungry... | 转-中互动 |
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| He isn't tired or hungry! | 合-中互动 |
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### 核心互动覆盖KP
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- tired ✅ / hungry ✅ / thirsty ✅ / forty（视设计）
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## 中互动数量统计
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| 段落 | 中互动数 |
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| 起 | 3 |
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| 承 | 6 |
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| 转 | 5 |
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| 合 | 1（+核心互动1） |
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| **总计** | **15个中互动 + 1个核心互动** |
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## 待确认
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1. forty的剧情融入——目前用了"forty steps"、"forty coins"、"forty degrees"、"40%电量"四种语境，是否OK？
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2. Sam在烘焙坊的出场是否需要更多戏份，还是目前交代入场费后退场即可？
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3. 核心互动（口语）的详细3轮设计需要我单独出吗？
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