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# Session: 2026-05-25 18:25:36 GMT+8
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- **Session Key**: agent:xiaobian:feishu:direct:ou_859415bde7f8e07cf5f24940f299a287
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- **Session ID**: e4f5a669-2195-4d14-b7d9-a19d88f0816f
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- **Source**: feishu
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## Conversation Summary
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assistant: 找到表格了。现在读取知识点 Sheet 和剧本 Sheet。
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assistant: 资料读取完成。让我再检查一下其他 Sheet 是否有额外信息,同时也参考一下之前的剧本格式。
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assistant: 资料已全部读取。现在整理一下:
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**知识点 (6个):**
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- `kitchen`(单词)| `kid`(单词,需有单数教学)| `many`(单词)| `really`(单词)
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- `It's really...`(句型)| `There are many...`(句型)
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**剧情:** 4场 + 尾声,沙暴中避难 → 厨房做饭 → 油锅起火 → 停电密道
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按林逸瀚协作惯例,先出节奏表。我查一下参考格式和规范再动手。
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assistant: 格式和协作流程已确认。按惯例先出节奏表。
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---
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## U24-L2 节奏表 V1
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**知识点:** kitchen / kid(s) / many / really / It's really... / There are many...
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---
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### 第一场:沙暴避难 — 开场
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| # | 类型 | 内容 |
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| 1 | TL | 【场景】Tom家客厅(窗外风沙漫天)【全屏插入图】沙尘暴中 Mama Green 站在 Tom 家门口,护着孩子们往里跑 |
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| 2 | TL | Mama Green 扫视一圈:少了一个 |
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| 3 | | **Mama Green:** "Where is Sue?" |
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| 4 | | **Kid A:** "She didn't come back!" |
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| 5 | TL | Mama Green 二话不说冲进风沙 |
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| 6 | | **User:** "It's really windy!" → 🎯 `really` 输入 + `It's really...` 句型输入 |
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| 7 | TL | 【全屏插入图2】Mama Green 提着 Sue 回来,风沙中身影坚毅 |
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| 8 | | **User:** "Mama Green is amazing!" |
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| 9 | | **Kid B:** "Thank you, Mama Green!" |
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| 10 | TL | 【转场】切到 Tom 家客厅内。孩子们坐在地上,个个灰头土脸 |
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| 11 | | **User:** "I'm really hungry." → 🎯 `really` 输入 |
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| 12 | TL | Mama Green 看向 Jay 和 Lin |
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| 13 | | **Mama Green:** "You two. Cook for the kids." |
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| 14 | TL | 转身对 Tony |
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| 15 | | **Mama Green:** "Look after the kids for me, okay?" |
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| 16 | | **Tony:** "Okay!" |
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| 17 | TL | User 和 Sue 站起来,主动请缨 |
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| 18 | | **User:** "I want to help in the kitchen!" → 🎯 `kitchen` 输入 |
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| 19 | | **Sue:** "Me too!" |
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| 20 | | **Mama Green:** "Great! Two little helpers." → 🎯 `kid` 语境铺垫 |
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| 21 | TL | Jay 斜眼看着 User 和 Sue,嗤之以鼻 |
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| 22 | | **Jay:** "Kids in the kitchen?" |
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| 23 | | **Lin:** "Kids can't do many things." → 🎯 `kids` 输入 / `many` 输入 |
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| 24 | **中互动** | **User 对 Jay/Lin 的反驳** → 🎯 User 输出 |
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| | | **User:** "Kids can do many things!" → 🎯 `kids` 输出 / `many` 输出 |
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| 25 | TL | Jay 耸耸肩,转身走进厨房。Lin 冲 User 做了个鬼脸跟上 |
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---
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### 第二场:厨房大作战
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| # | 类型 | 内容 |
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| 26 | TL | 【场景】Tom家厨房(橱柜、灶台、食材堆满桌面)【角色】User、Sue、Mama Green、Jay、Lin |
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| 27 | TL | User 环顾四周——食材堆得满满当当 |
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| 28 | | **User:** "There are many ingredients!" → 🎯 `There are many...` 句型输入 |
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| 29 | | **Mama Green:** "Yes! Let's make beef burgers." |
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| 30 | TL | Green 分配任务:User 和 Sue 负责洗菜叠菜 |
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| 31 | TL | User 和 Sue 配合默契——一个洗,一个叠,蔬菜塔越堆越高 |
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| 32 | | **Mama Green:** "Good job, kids!" → 🎯 `kids` 输入 |
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| 33 | TL | Jay 和 Lin 在另一边准备鸡蛋,Lin 想耍帅 |
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| 34 | | **Lin:** "Watch this!" |
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| 35 | TL | 【spine动画】Jay 学杂技单手打蛋——鸡蛋飞出去,"啪"砸在 Lin 头上,蛋液顺着脸流下 |
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| 36 | TL | User 和 Sue 忍不住笑出声 |
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| 37 | | **User:** "It's really funny!" → 🎯 `really` 输出 / `It's really...` 句型输出 |
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| 38 | TL | Jay 和 Lin 开始幼稚地互相甩锅 |
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| 39 | | **Jay:** "It's your head!" |
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| 40 | | **Lin:** "It's your egg!" |
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| 41 | TL | Mama Green 看着两人摇头叹气 |
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| 42 | | **Mama Green:** "You two are really like kids." → 🎯 `really` 输入 |
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| 43 | TL | Green 拿起面粉盆往外走 |
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| 44 | | **Mama Green:** "I will knead the dough outside." |
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| 45 | TL | Lin 擦掉头上的蛋液,不服气地看了一眼 User 这边 |
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| 46 | | **Lin:** "Now, we fry the steak." |
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| 47 | TL | Jay 开火,锅里倒油。Lin 故意走到 User 身边 |
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| 48 | | **Lin:** "Fire and oil. Very dangerous." |
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| 49 | | **Lin:** "Don't come close, kids." → 🎯 `kids` 输入 |
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| 50 | TL | Lin 走回灶台。Jay 和 Lin 开始煎牛排,故意把火烧得很旺,嘚瑟地回头瞟 User |
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| 51 | **中互动** | User 的内心吐槽(旁白) |
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| | | **User:** "It's really dangerous!" → 🎯 `really` 输出 / `It's really...` 句型输出 |
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---
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### 第三场:油锅起火
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| # | 类型 | 内容 |
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| 52 | TL | 【音效】窗外风暴声骤然变大,狂风猛烈拍打窗户 |
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| 53 | | **Jay:** "What was that?!" |
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| 54 | | **Lin:** "Let's go check!" |
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| 55 | TL | Jay 和 Lin 匆忙跑出厨房——忘了关火! |
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| 56 | TL | 【音效】油锅滋滋作响 → 啪一声冒烟 → 轰一声火焰窜起 |
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| 57 | TL | 厨房浓烟弥漫,所有人剧烈咳嗽 |
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| 58 | | **User:** "The kitchen is on fire!" → 🎯 `kitchen` 输出 |
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| 59 | TL | Jay 和 Lin 冲回来,对着火焰又吹又扇——火焰反而蹿得更高 |
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| 60 | TL | 两人吓得跳开好几米远 |
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| 61 | | **Jay & Lin:** "Ahhh!!" |
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| 62 | | **Sue:** "It's really dangerous!" → 🎯 `really` 输入 / `It's really...` 句型输入 |
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| 63 | TL | Sue 灵机一动 |
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| 64 | | **Sue:** "Cover the pot! Cover the pot!" |
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| 65 | TL | 用户帮忙大喊 |
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| 66 | | **User:** "Cover the pot!" |
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| 67 | TL | Mama Green 从外面冲进来,一把拿起锅盖,猛地盖上去——火焰瞬间熄灭 |
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| 68 | TL | 厨房安静了几秒。Green 转身看着缩在角落的 Jay 和 Lin |
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| 69 | | **Mama Green:** "The kids are calmer and braver than you!" → 🎯 `kids` 输入 |
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| 70 | **核心互动**(口语 — User 向 Mama Green 复述刚才发生了什么) |
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| | | **Mama Green:** "What happened?" |
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| | | **User 复述3轮:** ① 风太大,他们跑去看 → ② 忘了关火,油锅着火 → ③ Sue 说盖锅盖,我们喊了你 |
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| 71 | TL | 客厅里 Tony 带着 kids 也走进来帮忙收拾 |
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| 72 | TL | Jay 和 Lin 低着头走过来 |
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| 73 | | **Jay:** "We are sorry." |
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| 74 | | **Lin:** "Kids can do many things." → 🎯 `kids` 输出 / `many` 输出 |
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| 75 | TL | Mama Green 摸摸两人的头,笑了 |
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---
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### 第四场:停电密道
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| # | 类型 | 内容 |
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| 76 | TL | 【转场】餐桌上摆满了汉堡,大家围坐在一起 |
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| 77 | | **User:** "The burgers are great!" |
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| 78 | TL | 【音效】外面风声再次变强——轰隆隆 |
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| 79 | TL | 啪嗒一声,灯全灭了。客厅陷入黑暗 |
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| 80 | TL | 【音效】孩子们惊慌失措的叫声 |
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| 81 | | **Mama Green:** "Stay calm! Stay together!" |
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| 82 | TL | 黑暗中有人撞到了身后的矮柜 |
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| 83 | TL | 【音效】柜子移开的沉闷声响 |
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| 84 | TL | 矮柜后面,露出一条向下延伸的楼梯——密道! |
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| 85 | TL | 所有人都愣住了,盯着那个入口 |
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| 86 | TL | 【黑屏】TO BE CONTINUED... |
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---
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### 知识点覆盖追踪
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| 知识点 | 输入次数 | 输入位置 | 输出次数 | 输出位置 |
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|--------|:---:|------|:---:|------|
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| kitchen(单词) | 1 | #18 User | 1 | #58 User |
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| kid(s)(单词) | 4 | #23 Lin, #32 Green, #49 Lin, #69 Green | 3 | #24 中互动, #74 Lin, #69语境 |
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| many(单词) | 1 | #23 Lin | 2 | #24 中互动, #74 Lin |
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| really(单词) | 3 | #6 User, #11 User, #42 Green | 2 | #37 中互动, #51 中互动 |
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| It's really...(句型) | 1 | #6 User | 2 | #37 中互动, #51 中互动 |
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| There are many...(句型) | 1 | #28 User | 0 | — |
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**⚠️ 提醒:** `There are many...` 句型目前只有输入没有输出,需要在某处补一个输出点。
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---
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你看看节奏表,有问题直接说。
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user: 你先不急,更新一下
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与我的协助流程。
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每个 Lesson(如 U22 L1、L2…)按以下流程推进:
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```
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┌─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐
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│ 1. 接收故事大纲 + 知识点 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 2. 拆解「起」→ 产出节奏表(桥段 + 知识点输入 + 中互动) │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 3. 林逸瀚反馈 → 修改节奏表(可能多轮迭代) │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 4. 节奏表定稿 → 输出剧本 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 5. 林逸瀚审阅 → 可能要求语言难度/台词调整 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 6. 剧本定稿 → 转 Excel 发给林逸瀚 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 7. 林逸瀚最终修改 → 回传定稿版(飞书知识库链接) │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 8. 进入「承」→ 重复步骤 2-7 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 9. 进入「转」→ 重复步骤 2-7 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 10. 进入「合」→ 重复步骤 2-7 │
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│ ↓ │
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│ 11. ✅ 该 Lesson 剧本完成 │
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└─────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┘
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```
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**补充说明(从实际协作中总结):**
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- 步骤 2-3 节奏表可能经过多轮迭代(V1→V2→V3...),林逸瀚会给出具体方向调整
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- 步骤 4-5 剧本输出后可能需要调整语言难度(台词须符合 Pre-A1 水平)
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- 步骤 6 Excel 格式按 4 列标准(类型/剧情描述/名字/台词),知识点做富文本标注
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- 步骤 7 林逸瀚的最终修改版会以飞书知识库文档形式回传
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---
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## 节奏表说明
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节奏表必须清晰呈现三个维度:
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1. **桥段:** 按时间线拆解的情节段落,能看出每个情节的长度
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2. **知识点输入:** 词汇/句型在哪个桥段、以什么方式出现(首次引入/复现/强化)
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3. **中互动:** 互动环节的位置、类型、数量
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通过节奏表可以快速掌握:
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- 某个情节的长度
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- 中互动的总数量
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- 输入的知识点是否足够
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assistant: 收到,先更新协作流程到记忆和日志,然后重新按「起承转合」分步来。
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assistant: 流程已更新到日志和记忆。现在按「起承转合」重出,先来 **「起」** 段。
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---
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## U24-L2「起」节奏表 V1
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### 一、桥段拆解
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```
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┌────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┐
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│ 段落1 沙暴中避难 │
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│ · Mama Green 守住Tom家门口,孩子们跑进 → Sue不见了 │
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│ · Mama Green 冲进风沙找回Sue → 大家惊叹 │
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│ · 🎯 really + It's really...(首次引入,User看沙暴感叹) │
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│ ~5个节点 │
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├────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┤
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│ 段落2 大家都饿了 │
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│ · 切到Tom家客厅,孩子们灰头土脸 → User喊饿 │
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│ · Mama Green 安排分工:速猴做饭 / Tony看kids │
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│ · 🎯 really(复现,User"I'm really hungry") │
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│ ~4个节点 │
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├────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┤
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│ 段落3 User主动请缨 │
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│ · User+Sue 自告奋勇去kitchen帮忙 → Green欢迎 │
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│ · Jay&Lin 嗤之以鼻:"Kids can't do many things" │
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│ · 🎯 kitchen(首次引入)/ kids(首次引入)/ many(首次引入)│
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│ · 💬 中互动①:User反驳 → "Kids can do many things!" │
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│ ~6个节点 │
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├────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┤
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│ 进入厨房,切「承」 │
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└────────────────────────────────────────────────────────┘
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```
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### 二、知识点输入清单
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| 知识点 | 引入方式 | 位置 | 台词 |
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|--------|----------|------|------|
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| `really` | 🔵 首次 | 段落1 | User: "It's really windy!" 🌪️ |
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| `It's really...` | 🔵 首次 | 段落1 | 同上,句型首次亮相 |
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| `really` | 🟢 复现 | 段落2 | User: "I'm really hungry." |
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| `kitchen` | 🔵 首次 | 段落3 | User: "I want to help in the kitchen!" |
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| `kid(s)` | 🔵 首次 | 段落3 | Lin: "Kids can't do many things." |
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| `many` | 🔵 首次 | 段落3 | Lin: "Kids can't do many things." |
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### 三、中互动
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| # | 位置 | 类型 | 内容 | 覆盖知识点 |
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|:---:|------|------|------|:---:|
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| ① | 段落3末尾 | 口语 | User 反驳 Jay&Lin 的嘲笑 | `kids` `many` |
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> **User输出:** "Kids can do many things!"
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### 四、「起」段知识点小计
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| | kitchen | kid(s) | many | really | It's really... | There are many... |
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|---|:---:|:---:|:---:|:---:|:---:|:---:|
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| 输入 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | — |
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| 输出 | — | 1 | 1 | — | — | — |
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---
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「起」段节奏:三个段落,1个中互动,引入 kitchen/kids/many/really + It's really... 句型。看一下。
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user: 节奏表能用表格格式发我吗?不要用md格式写。比较难看。
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assistant: 已用飞书消息发出,查收一下。你看这个格式是否比 md 好一些?还是想要别的形式?
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user: 好像不行,这个格式不太行。
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assistant: 换个干净格式试试:
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assistant: 已发。这种简洁列表式你看行吗?还是你心目中的格式是别样的——比如用飞书电子表格做一个节奏表 sheet?
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user: [media attached: /root/.openclaw/media/inbound/0552295c-3f56-4373-ba4a-3e754491c43c.jpg (image/jpeg) | /root/.openclaw/media/inbound/0552295c-3f56-4373-ba4a-3e754491c43c.jpg]
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[Image]
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User text:
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[Feishu ou_859415bde7f8e07cf5f24940f299a287 Mon 2026-05-25 18:21 GMT+8] 林逸瀚: /root/.openclaw/media/inbound/0552295c-3f56-4373-ba4a-3e754491c43c.jpg
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这种格式是md吗?
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Description:
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This is a partial Chinese-English script snippet for *Scene 3: Oil Pot Catches Fire*, the 3rd page of 3 total pages for this scene, presented as a 3-column (line number
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assistant: 明白了,格式是 Excel 表格不是 md。我把节奏表直接写进飞书表格里。
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assistant: 节奏表已写入飞书表格,林逸瀚权限也已添加。
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📊 https://makee-interactive.feishu.cn/sheets/Qh6es6AZWhTtmRtjTREcZBvBnRA
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3列格式:`#` / `类型` / `内容`,跟你发的截图同款。你看看这个表格格式对了吗?内容上有什么要调的?
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