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# Session: 2026-06-18 10:24:47 GMT+8
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- **Session Key**: agent:xiaobian:feishu:direct:ou_3abad542579ba871b293d126f8f206ee
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- **Session ID**: ea42b778-47fa-4f39-8006-fe7b467e4b8a
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- **Source**: feishu
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## Conversation Summary
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c103a2658a0c29dec1ac256291]
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姜小妹: 出一下Excel吧
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assistant: U26L4_合段_剧本.xlsx
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assistant: 已发 ✅
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c10381c30f4c235fce24bf86ef]
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姜小妹: 你刚给我的完整的剧本知识点输出有多少？
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assistant: 统计一下四段剧本中User在**中互动**里的知识点输出：
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## 全课知识点输出统计
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### 起段
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| # | User台词 | 输出KP |
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|---|---------|--------|
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| 1 | Eighty?! And he took seventy?! | eighty ×1, seventy ×1 |
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| 2 | Can you help Bingo? Maybe Bingo can use potato power! | help ×1, use ×1 |
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### 承段
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| # | User台词 | 输出KP |
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|---|---------|--------|
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| 3 | Eighty! That helps a lot! | eighty ×1, That helps a lot ×1 |
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| 4 | We can use this box! Much faster! | We can use ×1 |
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| 5 | 【插入图】装土豆 | （图片互动） |
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| 6 | Eighty! All done! | eighty ×1 |
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| 7 | We can use this ladder! | We can use ×1 |
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| 8 | 【插入图】选芯片 | （图片互动） |
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| 9 | Let me help you! | help ×1 |
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| 10 | Eighty! We got eighty wires! | eighty ×1 |
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### 转段
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| # | User台词 | 输出KP |
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|---|---------|--------|
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| 11 | I can help! Let me use the wires! | help ×1, use ×1 |
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| 12 | Seventy! It's going up! | seventy ×1 |
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| 13 | That helps a lot! Keep going! | That helps a lot ×1 |
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| 14 | Eighty! Bingo is full! | eighty ×1 |
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### 合段
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| # | User台词 | 输出KP |
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|---|---------|--------|
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| 15 | That helps a lot, Bingo! | That helps a lot ×1 |
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| 16 | You can help? That's great! | help ×1 |
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---
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## 汇总
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| 知识点 | 输出次数 | 标准(2-3次) | 达标？ |
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|--------|---------|------------|--------|
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| seventy | 2 | 2-3 | ✅ |
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| eighty | 5 | 2-3 | ⚠️ 偏多 |
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| help | 4 | 2-3 | ⚠️ 偏多 |
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| use | 2 | 2-3 | ✅ |
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| We can use...(n). | 2 | 2-3 | ✅ |
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| That helps a lot. | 3 | 2-3 | ✅ |
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**中互动总数：** 14个（含2个图片互动）+ 1个核心互动
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---
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eighty输出5次、help输出4次偏多。需要砍掉几个吗？比如：
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- 承段"Eighty! All done!"或"Eighty! We got eighty wires!"去掉一个改为TL叙事
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- 转段"I can help!"改成不含help的台词
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你看要不要精简？
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c1c6e880888c2da0bd95851314]
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姜小妹: 我的U26L4剧本写完了，帮我检查一下
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assistant: 好的，剧本写在哪里？是飞书文档还是Excel文件？把链接或文件发给我，我来检查。
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c1c6b2ad4a8c1e81d762978957]
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姜小妹: https://makee-interactive.feishu.cn/wiki/L3Gaw2pXgis2yMk27G6cJYlWnec?from=from_copylink
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assistant: 文档里的剧本内容是以飞书电子表格（sheet）形式嵌入的，我需要读取表格内容。
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assistant: 好的，全部读取完毕。现在来仔细检查。
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assistant: 检查完毕，整理报告：
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---
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## U26L4 剧本检查报告
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### ✅ 通过项
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1. **台词长度** — 全部NPC单句≤12词，无超标 ✅
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2. **输入→输出顺序** — seventy/eighty/help/use/That helps a lot 均为NPC先输入、User后输出 ✅
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3. **中互动数量** — 14个 + 1个核心互动 ✅（标准14-17个）
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4. **知识点数字用英文拼写** — seventy/eighty全部用拼写 ✅
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### ✅ 知识点输出统计
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| KP | 输出次数 | 达标？ |
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|----|---------|--------|
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| seventy | 2 | ✅ |
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| eighty | 3 | ✅ |
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| help (单词) | 3（纯动词）+ 3（句型中含help）= 共6 | ⚠️ 见下方说明 |
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| use | 3 | ✅ |
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| We can use...(n). | 2 | ✅ |
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| That helps a lot. | 3 | ✅ |
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### ⚠️ 需关注
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**1. help 输出偏多（6次）**
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- 纯help动词输出：行53/63/128 = 3次
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- 句型"That helps a lot"中也含help：行68/108/171 = 3次
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- 如果教研合并计数则共6次，远超标准2-3次。建议确认教研计数规则——如果句型中的help独立计数，可以考虑砍掉行63（"I can help to make it!"）
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**2. 句型 We can use 缺少NPC输入**
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- User在行76首次输出"We can use these boxes"，但之前NPC没有说过完整的"We can use..."句型
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- 建议在行76之前加一句NPC输入，比如让Lin先说"We can use..."引导
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**3. 行53-55 互动间距较近**
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- 行53"Can you help Bingo?" → 行54 Lin只说了一个"What?" → 行55"Maybe Bingo can use potato power!"
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- 中间仅隔一行单词TL，节奏偏紧。可以在Lin回应后多加一两行表演再接第二个互动
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### ❌ 拼写/语法错误（4处）
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| 行 | 角色 | 问题 | 修正 |
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|----|------|------|------|
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| 60 | Jay | "pool Bingo" | → **poor** Bingo |
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| 111 | Lin | "We need Wires." | → We need **wires.** （不需大写） |
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| 139 | Lin | "We all done!" | → **We're all done!** 或 **All done!** |
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| 175 | User | "Humm..." | → **Hmm...** |
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### ℹ️ 整体评价
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剧本完成度很高，情绪节奏好（速猴哭穷→Jay犯傻搞笑→拆家当心疼→充电激动→土豆用光落差→Bingo分享感动），Eleven的口癖"Bip-Bop"很有辨识度。以上4处拼写和2-3处结构微调即可定稿。
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c1c093af4a4c3d60a7191d8825]
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姜小妹: https://makee-interactive.feishu.cn/wiki/L3Gaw2pXgis2yMk27G6cJYlWnec?from=from_copylink改完了 再检查一下 达标就行你别管我输出多少
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assistant: 检查完毕 ✅ 上次的4个问题修了3个，整体达标。
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## 复查结果
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### ✅ 已修正（3/4）
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- ~~pool~~ → **poor** ✅
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- ~~Wires~~ → **wires** ✅
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- ~~We all done~~ → **We're all done** ✅
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- Jay台词补了 **We can use** 的NPC输入 ✅
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### ✅ 全部知识点达标
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| KP | 输出 | 输入先于输出 |
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|----|------|------------|
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| seventy | 2次 ✅ | ✅ |
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| eighty | 3次 ✅ | ✅ |
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| help | 6次 | ✅ |
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| use | 3次 ✅ | ✅ |
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| We can use | 2次 ✅ | ✅ |
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| That helps a lot | 3次 ✅ | ✅ |
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中互动14个 + 核心互动1个 ✅
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### ⚠️ 残留小问题（1处）
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- **行175** User台词 "**Humm**..." → 应为 "**Hmm**..."
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这个改不改都行，不影响达标。
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user: [message_id: om_x100b6c1c022710acc4c3b5420eee9f2]
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姜小妹: 好了，你归档记录吧
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assistant: 已归档 ✅
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- **任务日志** `business_knowledge/task_log/U26L4剧本.md` → 标记已定稿，记录终稿数据
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- **活跃任务索引** `business_knowledge/active_tasks.md` → U26L4标记已定稿，U26进度更新为L4✅
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- **日记忆** `memory/2026-06-17.md` → 记录流程和经验
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U26只剩L5了 💪
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