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U23-L1「转」剧本 — Draft V1
接续点： 承的最后一行（第159行）——圆球全消失，SaSa蹲原地，众人呆住。 场景： Shop门外 → 公园内部（追踪路线）→ 公园角落 知识点目标： pet ×1输出 / silly ×2输出 / I can't find ×1输出 中互动数量： 3个
剧本正文
| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 | 角色 | 台词润色 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| TL | 【场景】Shop 门外。电视机还亮着雪花。小圆球全部消失。只有 SaSa 趴在原地，尾巴轻轻摇。 | ||||
| Nina | Where is WeWe! | ||||
| Jade | ViVi is gone too! | ||||
| May | DiDi! BoBo! | ||||
| Ben | They were here! | ||||
| Ben | Right in front of TV! | ||||
| Marcus 蹲下来看 SaSa，SaSa 对他舔舔手。 | |||||
| Marcus | SaSa is fine. | ||||
| Nina | Why only SaSa is okay? | ||||
| Marcus 挠了挠头，表情纠结。 | |||||
| Marcus | Because... | ||||
| Marcus | SaSa is not a robot. | ||||
| 全场安静了两秒。 | |||||
| Ben | What? | ||||
| Marcus | SaSa is my pet dog. | ||||
| Marcus | I put a round coat on it. | ||||
| 【emoji】emoji_shock | May | A dog!? | |||
| SaSa 站起来抖了抖，圆壳外套松了，露出毛耳朵。 | |||||
| Marcus | Sorry I lied. | ||||
| Marcus | I wanted to fit in. | ||||
| Ben | That's why it didn't watch TV! | ||||
| Marcus | Dogs can't see robot shows. | ||||
| 中互动 | User | SaSa is not a robot. SaSa is a pet! | |||
| TL | Marcus | Yes... my pet dog. | |||
| May | But Marcus! | ||||
| May | Can dogs find robots? | ||||
| Marcus | SaSa has a good nose. | ||||
| Marcus | She can smell BoBo! | ||||
| SaSa 把鼻子贴地面，闻了闻——尾巴突然摇起来，朝公园方向跑。 | |||||
| Marcus | She got something! Follow! | ||||
| 众人跟着 SaSa 跑进公园。 | |||||
| TL | 【场景】小圆球公园内部（复用起的公园地图） | ||||
| SaSa 一路闻着地面跑，经过长椅、滑梯，然后——停在热狗摊前。 | |||||
| SaSa 蹲下，盯着热狗摊流口水。尾巴疯狂摇摆。 | |||||
| Marcus | SaSa! No! | ||||
| Ben | Hahaha! | ||||
| 【emoji】emoji_laugh | Ben | Silly SaSa! | |||
| Nina | That dog is so silly! | ||||
| 【emoji】emoji_nervous Marcus 脸红，拽 SaSa 的绳子。 | |||||
| Marcus | Come on SaSa! Not now! | ||||
| 中互动 | User | SaSa is so silly! Don't eat now! | |||
| TL | SaSa 被拽走，回头看了热狗摊一眼，恋恋不舍。 | ||||
| SaSa 重新低头闻地面，这次认真了——加速朝公园角落跑。 | |||||
| 众人跟着跑到公园边缘一片灌木后面。 | |||||
| SaSa 停下，对着灌木后面汪了一声。 | |||||
| May | What's there? | ||||
| 中互动 | User | I can't find the robots... Wait! Look! | |||
| TL | 【镜头】灌木后面的空地上—— | ||||
| Tony（假 Tom）站在中间，一群小圆球围着他。Tony 双手叉腰。 | |||||
| Tony | Freeze! | ||||
| 所有小圆球瞬间一动不动——像真的玩"一二三木头人"。 | |||||
| Tony 弯腰，把定住的圆球一个一个抱起来，放进一只大布袋。 | |||||
| 圆球在袋子里也一动不动——它们还在遵守游戏规则。 | |||||
| Ben | Oh! They are playing Freeze! | ||||
| Nina | That looks fun! | ||||
| Ben | Haha so silly! | ||||
| Ben | The robots don't move at all! | ||||
| Tony 把最后一只圆球塞进袋子，扛上肩膀。 | |||||
| 他转身看到孩子们，愣了一秒——然后挤出微笑。 | |||||
| Tony | Oh! Hey kids! | ||||
| Tony | Just playing a game. | ||||
| Tony | The robots love Freeze! | ||||
| 【emoji】emoji_smile Tony 拍了拍袋子，扛着走远了。 | |||||
| 孩子们挥手。 | |||||
| Nina | Bye Mayor Tom! | ||||
| 只有 User 站在原地，看着 Tony 的背影。 | |||||
| 【镜头】Tony 扛着鼓鼓囊囊的袋子，走出公园大门。逆光剪影。 | |||||
| TL | 转完结。 |
知识点统计
| 知识点 | 出现 | 备注 |
|---|---|---|
| pet (n) | 中互动1：User "SaSa is not a robot. SaSa is a pet!" | ✅ 输出×1 |
| silly (adj) | 中互动2：User "SaSa is so silly!" + Ben/Nina台词双击 | ✅ 输出×1（User） + 输入×2（NPC） |
| I can't find | 中互动3：User "I can't find the robots..." | ✅ 输出×1 |
设计说明
- 知识点输入→输出顺序： 每个中互动前都有NPC先引入语境
- pet：Marcus 先说 "SaSa is my pet dog"（输入）→ User 输出
- silly：Ben 先喊 "Silly SaSa!"（输入）→ User 输出
- I can't find：May 问 "What's there?"引导搜索语境 → User 输出
- NPC单句词数： 最长 "I put a round coat on it." = 7词 ✅
- Freeze游戏双层叙事： 孩子看到游戏+搞笑，观众看到阴谋
- 最后一帧： Tony逆光剪影扛袋离开——视觉悬念