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L1-S2-U18-L1 段落3-4 剧本草稿
知识点追踪(段落1-2已有 → 段落3-4需补充)
| 知识点 | 段落1-2输入 | 段落1-2输出 | 段落3-4目标 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Lesson (n.) | 充足 | 2 | 输出+1 |
| Subject (n.) | 充足 | 3 | 可再用 |
| Learn (v.) | 3 | 2 | 输出+1 |
| China (n.) | 充足 | 4 | 适度 |
| proud of | 0 | 0 | 输入2+输出2~3 |
| learn about | 2 | 2 | 输出+1 |
段落3:找回中国的东西
接续Row 152,Justin空台词行之后。
| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Justin | My dear Granddaughter will help me! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_nervous | Vicky | Sure...Grandpa. | |
| User | Don't worry. I'll help too! | ||
| Vicky | Thank you! | ||
| TL | Justin拿出摄像机,对着Vicky。 | ||
| Justin | I want to film Vicky finding everything! | ||
| Justin | I'm so proud of my Granddaughter! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed。Vicky捂脸。 | Vicky | Grandpa...not the camera again... | |
| Justin | Go go! Find my things! | ||
| TL | User和Vicky离开Justin,沿着教学大楼走廊开始搜索。走廊上散落着一些发黑的碎片和烟火痕迹。 | ||
| Vicky | The things went everywhere! | ||
| User | Let's look around. | ||
| 走廊的角落,User发现了一个奇怪的木头架子,上面串着一排排彩色珠子。 | |||
| User | What is this? | ||
| Vicky | I think it's for math! | ||
| 【画外音】远处传来Justin的声音 | |||
| Justin | That is an abacus! People in China use it to count! | ||
| Justin | It's for your math lesson! | ||
| 对话互动 | 【教研图】算盘特写,上面的珠子排列整齐,颜色鲜艳。 | ||
| User | An abacus! It's for our math subject! | ||
| TL | User把算盘放进一个布袋里。Vicky在旁拍手。 | ||
| Vicky | One down! | ||
| Justin端着摄像机追了上来,镜头怼在Vicky脸上。 | |||
| Justin | Vicky! Tell the camera what you found! | ||
| Justin | I am so proud of you! | ||
| Vicky | It wasn't me! My friend found it! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | Vicky | Grandpa, please... | |
| 对话互动 | User再次帮Vicky解围,对着镜头介绍。 | ||
| User | We found an abacus! We can learn about China from it! | ||
| TL | Justin满意地点头,暂时收起摄像机。 | ||
| Justin | Good job, kid! | ||
| User和Vicky继续在走廊深处搜索。Vicky指着窗台上一个卷起来的东西。 | |||
| Vicky | Look! There's something on the window! | ||
| User走过去,拿起来展开。是一卷写满了奇怪文字的古老卷轴。 | |||
| User | Wow! What's this? | ||
| Vicky | Old writing! It looks so cool! | ||
| 【画外音】 | |||
| Justin | That is an old Chinese book! | ||
| Justin | There are many lessons inside it. | ||
| 对话互动 | 【教研图】古书/卷轴特写,上面有毛笔字和简单的插图。 | ||
| User | An old book with many lessons! | ||
| TL | User把卷轴小心卷好放进布袋。 | ||
| Vicky | Two down! One more to go! | ||
| User | Where is the last one? | ||
| User和Vicky来到走廊尽头的公告栏旁。公告栏上挂满了各种海报,其中一张特别大,颜色发旧。 | |||
| Vicky | There! On the wall! | ||
| Vicky指着一张泛黄的大纸。User凑近一看——是一张古老的地图。 | |||
| User | A map! | ||
| 图片互动-单选 | 【教研图】古地图展开。地图上标注了几个地名:China、India、Japan、Egypt。找到China的位置。 | ||
| User | Here is China! | ||
| TL | |||
| 【音效】Justin从转角冲出来,摄像机再次对准Vicky。 | |||
| Justin | My Granddaughter! You are so smart! | ||
| Justin | I'm very proud of you! | ||
| Vicky | Grandpa! It wasn't just me! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | |||
| 对话互动 | User第三次帮Vicky解围。 | ||
| User | We found all three things! We can learn about China now! | ||
| TL | Justin终于收起摄像机,竖起大拇指。 | ||
| Justin | Wonderful! Let's go back! | ||
| User和Vicky带着装满东西的布袋,跟Justin一起走回学校门口。 |
段落4:月光宝盒与龙的投影
| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 【场景】学校门口(延续段落2的装饰场景) | |||
| 【角色】User、Ben、Vicky、Kim、Sue、Justin、Eleven | |||
| TL | 回到门口的长台前,Ben、Kim、Sue围上来。Eleven站在旁边,身上还有一些烟火的黑灰痕迹。 | ||
| Ben | Did you find everything? | ||
| User | Yes! We found them all! | ||
| Kim | What did you find? | ||
| TL | User从布袋中一件一件拿出来展示。 | ||
| User | An abacus, an old book, and a map of China! | ||
| Sue | Wow! They are all from China! | ||
| 【emoji】Ben emoji_excited | Ben | Cool! | |
| Justin | Well done! You are all great students. | ||
| Justin | Now, there is one more thing in the box. | ||
| Justin从炸开的箱子残骸中小心翼翼地取出一个金色的小盒子,上面刻着龙的图案。 | |||
| Justin | This is very special. | ||
| Vicky | What is it, Grandpa? | ||
| Justin | Open it and see! | ||
| 图片互动-单选 | 【教研图】金色小盒子特写,盒子上有龙纹和一个按钮/锁扣。User点击打开盒子。 | ||
| User | Let me open it! | ||
| TL | 【spine动画】盒子打开,一道光柱射出,一条巨大的龙的全息投影从盒子中跃出,在半空中盘旋。投影是蓝色/金色的,非常华丽。 | ||
| 【音效】神秘光效音+龙吟声 | |||
| 同学们都看呆了。 | |||
| Ben | A dragon! | ||
| Kim | It's so beautiful! | ||
| Sue | Is it real? | ||
| Justin | It's a hologram! A Chinese dragon! | ||
| 龙的投影在大家头上盘旋一圈后,缩回盒子里,光芒渐灭。 | |||
| Vicky | Can we see it again? | ||
| Justin | Of course! But only at the end of our China lessons. | ||
| Justin | If you learn well this week... | ||
| Justin | This dragon will come out again! | ||
| Justin | I am very proud of my students already! | ||
| 对话互动 | |||
| User | We will learn about China this week! | ||
| TL | |||
| Ben | I want to see the dragon again! | ||
| Kim | Me too! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_happy | Vicky | Okay...maybe this subject is not so bad. | |
| Justin | That's the spirit! | ||
| Justin | China lesson starts now! | ||
| 【音效】欢呼声。同学们围在一起,看着金色的盒子。 | |||
| Justin笑着再次悄悄拿起摄像机,对准Vicky。 | |||
| Justin | One more for the camera, Vicky! | ||
| Justin | I'm so proud of you! | ||
| 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | Vicky | GRANDPA! | |
| 大家都笑了。 | |||
| TL | 【全屏插入图】Vala School门口全景,灯笼、剪纸、龙的装饰,同学们站在一起,Justin在后面举着摄像机。画面文字:China Week Begins! |
知识点段落3-4统计
| 知识点 | 段落3输入 | 段落3输出 | 段落4输入 | 段落4输出 | 全课总输入 | 全课总输出 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Lesson | 2(Justin台词) | 1(古书) | 1(Justin台词) | 0 | 充足 | 3 ✅ |
| Subject | 1(算盘) | 1 | 1(Vicky台词) | 0 | 充足 | 4 ✅ |
| Learn | 1(learn about) | 0 | 2(Justin台词) | 0 | 充足 | 2~3 ✅ |
| China | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 充足 | 充足 ✅ |
| proud of | 3(Justin) | 0 | 1(Justin) | 0 | 4 | 需要输出 ⚠️ |
| learn about | 0 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 充足 | 3 ✅ |
⚠️ proud of 需要User输出!需要在互动中加入。