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# L1-S2-U18-L1 段落3-4 剧本草稿
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## 知识点追踪（段落1-2已有 → 段落3-4需补充）
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| 知识点 | 段落1-2输入 | 段落1-2输出 | 段落3-4目标 |
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|--------|-----------|-----------|-----------|
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| Lesson (n.) | 充足 | 2 | 输出+1 |
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| Subject (n.) | 充足 | 3 | 可再用 |
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| Learn (v.) | 3 | 2 | 输出+1 |
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| China (n.) | 充足 | 4 | 适度 |
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| proud of | 0 | 0 | 输入2+输出2~3 |
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| learn about | 2 | 2 | 输出+1 |
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## 段落3：找回中国的东西
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接续Row 152，Justin空台词行之后。
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 |
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|------|---------|------|------|
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| | | Justin | My dear Granddaughter will help me! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_nervous | Vicky | Sure...Grandpa. |
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| | | User | Don't worry. I'll help too! |
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| | | Vicky | Thank you! |
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| TL | Justin拿出摄像机，对着Vicky。 | | |
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| | | Justin | I want to film Vicky finding everything! |
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| | | Justin | I'm so proud of my Granddaughter! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed。Vicky捂脸。 | Vicky | Grandpa...not the camera again... |
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| | | Justin | Go go! Find my things! |
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| TL | User和Vicky离开Justin，沿着教学大楼走廊开始搜索。走廊上散落着一些发黑的碎片和烟火痕迹。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | The things went everywhere! |
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| | | User | Let's look around. |
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| | 走廊的角落，User发现了一个奇怪的木头架子，上面串着一排排彩色珠子。 | | |
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| | | User | What is this? |
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| | | Vicky | I think it's for math! |
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| | 【画外音】远处传来Justin的声音 | | |
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| | | Justin | That is an abacus! People in China use it to count! |
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| | | Justin | It's for your math lesson! |
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| 对话互动 | 【教研图】算盘特写，上面的珠子排列整齐，颜色鲜艳。 | | |
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| | | User | An abacus! It's for our math subject! |
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| TL | User把算盘放进一个布袋里。Vicky在旁拍手。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | One down! |
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| | Justin端着摄像机追了上来，镜头怼在Vicky脸上。 | | |
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| | | Justin | Vicky! Tell the camera what you found! |
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| | | Justin | I am so proud of you! |
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| | | Vicky | It wasn't me! My friend found it! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | Vicky | Grandpa, please... |
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| 对话互动 | User再次帮Vicky解围，对着镜头介绍。 | | |
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| | | User | We found an abacus! We can learn about China from it! |
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| TL | Justin满意地点头，暂时收起摄像机。 | | |
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| | | Justin | Good job, kid! |
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| | User和Vicky继续在走廊深处搜索。Vicky指着窗台上一个卷起来的东西。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Look! There's something on the window! |
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| | User走过去，拿起来展开。是一卷写满了奇怪文字的古老卷轴。 | | |
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| | | User | Wow! What's this? |
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| | | Vicky | Old writing! It looks so cool! |
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| | 【画外音】 | | |
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| | | Justin | That is an old Chinese book! |
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| | | Justin | There are many lessons inside it. |
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| 对话互动 | 【教研图】古书/卷轴特写，上面有毛笔字和简单的插图。 | | |
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| | | User | An old book with many lessons! |
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| TL | User把卷轴小心卷好放进布袋。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Two down! One more to go! |
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| | | User | Where is the last one? |
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| | User和Vicky来到走廊尽头的公告栏旁。公告栏上挂满了各种海报，其中一张特别大，颜色发旧。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | There! On the wall! |
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| | Vicky指着一张泛黄的大纸。User凑近一看——是一张古老的地图。 | | |
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| | | User | A map! |
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| 图片互动-单选 | 【教研图】古地图展开。地图上标注了几个地名：China、India、Japan、Egypt。找到China的位置。 | | |
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| | | User | Here is China! |
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| TL | | | |
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| | 【音效】Justin从转角冲出来，摄像机再次对准Vicky。 | | |
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| | | Justin | My Granddaughter! You are so smart! |
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| | | Justin | I'm very proud of you! |
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| | | Vicky | Grandpa! It wasn't just me! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | | |
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| 对话互动 | User第三次帮Vicky解围。 | | |
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| | | User | We found all three things! We can learn about China now! |
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| TL | Justin终于收起摄像机，竖起大拇指。 | | |
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| | | Justin | Wonderful! Let's go back! |
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| | User和Vicky带着装满东西的布袋，跟Justin一起走回学校门口。 | | |
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## 段落4：月光宝盒与龙的投影
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 |
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| | 【场景】学校门口（延续段落2的装饰场景） | | |
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| | 【角色】User、Ben、Vicky、Kim、Sue、Justin、Eleven | | |
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| TL | 回到门口的长台前，Ben、Kim、Sue围上来。Eleven站在旁边，身上还有一些烟火的黑灰痕迹。 | | |
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| | | Ben | Did you find everything? |
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| | | User | Yes! We found them all! |
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| | | Kim | What did you find? |
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| TL | User从布袋中一件一件拿出来展示。 | | |
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| | | User | An abacus, an old book, and a map of China! |
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| | | Sue | Wow! They are all from China! |
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| | 【emoji】Ben emoji_excited | Ben | Cool! |
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| | | Justin | Well done! You are all great students. |
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| | | Justin | Now, there is one more thing in the box. |
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| | Justin从炸开的箱子残骸中小心翼翼地取出一个金色的小盒子，上面刻着龙的图案。 | | |
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| | | Justin | This is very special. |
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| | | Vicky | What is it, Grandpa? |
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| | | Justin | Open it and see! |
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| 图片互动-单选 | 【教研图】金色小盒子特写，盒子上有龙纹和一个按钮/锁扣。User点击打开盒子。 | | |
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| | | User | Let me open it! |
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| TL | 【spine动画】盒子打开，一道光柱射出，一条巨大的龙的全息投影从盒子中跃出，在半空中盘旋。投影是蓝色/金色的，非常华丽。 | | |
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| | 【音效】神秘光效音+龙吟声 | | |
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| | 同学们都看呆了。 | | |
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| | | Ben | A dragon! |
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| | | Kim | It's so beautiful! |
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| | | Sue | Is it real? |
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| | | Justin | It's a hologram! A Chinese dragon! |
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| | 龙的投影在大家头上盘旋一圈后，缩回盒子里，光芒渐灭。 | | |
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| | | Vicky | Can we see it again? |
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| | | Justin | Of course! But only at the end of our China lessons. |
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| | | Justin | If you learn well this week... |
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| | | Justin | This dragon will come out again! |
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| | | Justin | I am very proud of my students already! |
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| 对话互动 | | | |
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| | | User | We will learn about China this week! |
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| | | Ben | I want to see the dragon again! |
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| | | Kim | Me too! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_happy | Vicky | Okay...maybe this subject is not so bad. |
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| | | Justin | That's the spirit! |
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| | | Justin | China lesson starts now! |
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| | 【音效】欢呼声。同学们围在一起，看着金色的盒子。 | | |
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| | Justin笑着再次悄悄拿起摄像机，对准Vicky。 | | |
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| | | Justin | One more for the camera, Vicky! |
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| | | Justin | I'm so proud of you! |
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| | 【emoji】Vicky emoji_embarrassed | Vicky | GRANDPA! |
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| | 大家都笑了。 | | |
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| TL | 【全屏插入图】Vala School门口全景，灯笼、剪纸、龙的装饰，同学们站在一起，Justin在后面举着摄像机。画面文字：China Week Begins! | | |
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## 知识点段落3-4统计
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| 知识点 | 段落3输入 | 段落3输出 | 段落4输入 | 段落4输出 | 全课总输入 | 全课总输出 |
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| Lesson | 2(Justin台词) | 1(古书) | 1(Justin台词) | 0 | 充足 | 3 ✅ |
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| Subject | 1(算盘) | 1 | 1(Vicky台词) | 0 | 充足 | 4 ✅ |
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| Learn | 1(learn about) | 0 | 2(Justin台词) | 0 | 充足 | 2~3 ✅ |
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| China | 2 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 充足 | 充足 ✅ |
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| proud of | 3(Justin) | 0 | 1(Justin) | 0 | 4 | 需要输出 ⚠️ |
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| learn about | 0 | 2 | 0 | 1 | 充足 | 3 ✅ |
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⚠️ proud of 需要User输出！需要在互动中加入。
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