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# Session: 2026-05-25 18:05:29 GMT+8
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- **Session Key**: agent:xiaobian:feishu:direct:ou_859415bde7f8e07cf5f24940f299a287
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- **Session ID**: 75c7e785-b8f6-4116-9979-ce74b393d9a4
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- **Source**: feishu
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## Conversation Summary
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assistant: NO_REPLY
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user: https://makee-interactive.feishu.cn/wiki/GvXTwO7V5iulQtkDOqPcM8o4nBe
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新剧本，看完我们进合，进合之前我有细节给你。你先看，等我指示。
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assistant: 看完了。你的改动让转段生动了很多，几个亮点：
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- **Tom 拒吃 Kiwi 的戏拉长了** — Smith "Try a bite" → Tom "It smells good..." → Fiona 再逼 "Come on. Take a bite." → Tom 勉强吃一口 "Not. Bad." → 立刻逃。评委会集体目睹他的反常，比原来 User/May 偷偷观察的视角更强
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- **Jack 成了观察者** — "Do you see whats wrong with Tom?" 让成人角色也参与见证可疑，承段埋的"全镇以为Tom爱吃"在转段开始反噬
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- **Sam 的情绪线** — "Kalab's kiwi is sweet. My pineapple doesn't have a chance!" → 绝望→厕所→被鼓励→"I will try"，完整的微型弧线
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- **Tom 的厕所梗** — Smith "He went to toilet again?" → Fiona 收尾 "Tom went to toilet again!" → went to the toilet 顺便多刷了一次输入
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**中互动核查：**
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| 中互动 | 知识点 | 状态 |
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| Tom did not eat Kiwi! | kiwi | ✅ |
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| The kiwi is so sweet! | kiwi | ✅ |
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| Sam went to the toilet! | went to the toilet | ✅ |
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| You have the best fruit! | fruit | ✅ |
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4 中互动全部含知识点。全课中互动累计 12，知识点全部达标。
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等你合段指示。
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user: Sam被带到会场了，我们却发现另一个评委Tom却不见人。
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我们在厕所里找到满脸通红的Tom，他说没事，我们跟Tom回去，Tom不愿意吃pineapple，只闻了一下，便宣布水果品鉴大会的冠军就是Sam的Pineapple！
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我们虽然替Sam高兴，同时我们也很疑惑。这场比赛真的公平吗？
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可是镇长Tom又不见了。我们跟在场的Lily说这件事，Lily说有些人吃Kiwi和pineapple，会让脸变得很红。但我们奇怪，Tom不是很喜欢吃Pineapple 和 Kiwi吗？
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上面是「合」的大纲这
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user: Sam被带到会场了，我们却发现另一个评委Tom却不见人。
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我们在厕所里找到满脸通红的Tom，他说没事，我们跟Tom回去，Tom不愿意吃pineapple，只闻了一下，便宣布水果品鉴大会的冠军就是Sam的Pineapple！
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我们虽然替Sam高兴，同时我们也很疑惑。这场比赛真的公平吗？
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可是镇长Tom又不见了。我们跟在场的Lily说这件事，Lily说有些人吃Kiwi和pineapple，会让脸变得很红。但我们奇怪，Tom不是很喜欢吃Pineapple 和 Kiwi吗？
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上面是「合」的大纲这
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user: Sam被带到会场了，我们却发现另一个评委Tom却不见人。
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我们在厕所里找到满脸通红的Tom，他说没事，我们跟Tom回去，Tom不愿意吃pineapple，只闻了一下，便宣布水果品鉴大会的冠军就是Sam的Pineapple！
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我们虽然替Sam高兴，同时我们也很疑惑。这场比赛真的公平吗？
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可是镇长Tom又不见了。我们跟在场的Lily说这件事，Lily说有些人吃Kiwi和pineapple，会让脸变得很红。但我们奇怪，Tom不是很喜欢吃Pineapple 和 Kiwi吗？
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上面是「合」的大纲，我需要以下几点改动：
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我们不用到厕所捞Tom了，走来走去节奏不好。改做Smith：我去厕所带他回来吧！然后镜头一转，满脸通红的Tom被带到评鉴会上。Tom说什么都不吃Pineapple，便直接说Sam 赢了。
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最后我们和Lily谈这件事，剧情改为Fiona 主动走过来跟我们说话，要我们照顾镇长：她看得出Tom过敏。这里是一个核心听力。Lily 则删去。
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出一个新的节奏表吧。包含两个中互动和最后的听力互动。
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assistant: ## U23-L2「合」节奏表 V1
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### 段落一：Tom 缺席 → Smith 去带人
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| 类型 | 内容 |
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| TL | 接转段结尾：众人回到评审桌前。Kalab、Sam 都就位。Tom 的座位空着 |
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| TL | Smith 扫了一眼: "Where is Tom?" |
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| TL | Fiona 往厕所方向张望: "He **went to the toilet**. He was not feeling well." |
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| TL | Smith 站起来: "I will bring him back." |
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| TL | 【转场】Smith 扶着满脸通红的 Tom 走回来。全场安静 |
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| TL | Tom 揉着脸，挥手: "I am fine. Let's do this." |
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### 段落二：Tom 拒吃 Pineapple → 宣布冠军
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| 类型 | 内容 |
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| TL | Sam 把 Pineapple 端上评审桌。果肉金黄，香气四溢 |
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| TL | Fiona 尝了一片: "It is sweet!" Smith 尝了一片: "Very good." |
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| TL | Kalab 在一边看着，手指敲着桌子 |
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| TL | 轮到 Tom。所有人看着他。Tom 盯着面前的 Pineapple，手没动 |
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| TL | Tom 拿起一片——放到鼻子前——闻了一下——放回去。没吃 |
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| **中互动** | User → "Tom did not eat the **pineapple**!" |
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| TL | Tom 突然站起来 |
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| TL | Tom: "Sam wins." |
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| TL | Tom: "His **pineapple** is the best **fruit**." |
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| TL | 【emoji】Sam😲 May🎉 |
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| **中互动** | User → "Sam's **pineapple** is the winner!" |
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### 段落三：Tom 又不见了 + Fiona 揭露过敏（核心听力）
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| 类型 | 内容 |
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| TL | 欢呼声中，Tom 悄悄从椅子上起身——溜向厕所方向 |
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| TL | May 转头，座位又空了: "Tom **went to the toilet** again?" |
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| TL | Jack: "He did not even try the **pineapple**..." |
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| TL | Jack: "Was the game fair?" |
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| TL | 我们也在想同样的事。这时 Fiona 走过来，表情温和 |
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| TL | Fiona: "Kids. I want to tell you something." |
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| TL | Fiona: "When Tom eats **kiwi** or **pineapple**..." |
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| TL | Fiona: "...his face turns red." |
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| TL | Fiona: "His eyes get puffy. He cannot breathe well." |
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| TL | Fiona: "That is a food allergy." |
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| TL | Fiona: "Some **fruit** can make people sick." |
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| **听力互动** | Fiona 刚才说了 Tom 为什么不吃 pineapple。请 User 回答：Why did Tom not eat the **pineapple**? |
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| TL | Fiona 微笑，拍拍 User: "That is right. Look after Tom for me, okay?" |
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| TL | ⚡收束钩子：Fiona 走了。May 看着 User — 眼神里全是问号。Jack 说过 Tom 喜欢吃 Pineapple。Jack 也说过 Tom 喜欢吃 Kiwi。一个对这两种水果过敏的人，为什么全镇都以为他喜欢？ |
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## 全课最终盘点
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| 知识点 | 起→合计 | 状态 |
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| fruit | 4→1 + 转1 + 合1 | ✅ |
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| kiwi | 4→1 + 转2 | ✅ |
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| pineapple | 3→2 + 承1 + 转 + 合2 | ✅ |
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| toilet | 承2→1 + 转2 | ✅ |
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| went to the toilet | 承2→1 + 转1 + 合2 | ✅ |
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| What fruit do you like? | 1→1 + 承2→1 | ✅ |
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**全课中互动：** 14 个（起4 + 承4 + 转4 + 合2） + 1 听力互动
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**Lily：** 已删，替换为 Fiona
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---
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请审阅。
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user: 听力互动是核心互动，写剧本的时候请遵照核心互动的写法。现在出剧本我看看。
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assistant: ## U23-L2「合」剧本 V1
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| 类型 | 剧情描述 | 角色名 | 编剧台词 |
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| TL | 【场景】会场 — 评审桌前<br>【角色】User、May、Sam、Jack、Kalab、Tom、Smith、Fiona | | |
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| | 接转段结尾：众人回到评审桌前。Kalab、Sam 都就位。Tom 的座位空着 | | |
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| | | Smith | Where is Tom? |
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| | Fiona 往厕所方向望了一眼 | | |
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| | | Fiona | He **went to the toilet**. |
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| | | Fiona | He was not feeling well. |
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| | Smith 站起来 | | |
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| | | Smith | I will bring him back. |
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| | 【转场】Smith 扶着满脸通红的 Tom 走回来。全场安静 | | |
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| | Tom 坐下，揉着脸 | | |
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| | | Tom | I am fine. Let's do this. |
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| TL | Sam 把 Pineapple 端上评审桌。果肉金黄，香气四溢 | | |
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| | | Fiona | Wow. It looks good! |
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| | | Smith | Let's try. |
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| | Fiona 尝了一片，眼睛亮了。Smith 尝了一片，满意地点头 | | |
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| | 轮到 Tom。所有人看着他。Tom 盯着面前的 Pineapple，手没动 | | |
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| | Tom 拿起一片——送到鼻子前——闻了一下——放回盘子。没吃 | | |
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| **中互动** | | User | Tom did not eat the **pineapple**! |
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| | Tom 突然站起来 | | |
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| | | Tom | Sam wins. |
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| | | Tom | His **pineapple** is the best. |
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| | 【emoji】Sam😲 May🎉 Kalab😐 | | |
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| | | May | You won, Sam! |
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| | | Sam | I... I did it? |
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| **中互动** | | User | Sam's **pineapple** is the winner! |
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| TL | 欢呼声中，Tom 悄悄从椅子上起身——往厕所方向溜去 | | |
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| | May 转头，座位又空了 | | |
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| | | May | Tom **went to the toilet** again? |
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| | | Jack | He did not even try the **pineapple**. |
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| | | Jack | Was the game fair? |
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| | User 和 Sam 也在想同样的事 | | |
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| | 【emoji】User🤨 May🤨 | | |
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| | 这时 Fiona 走过来，表情温和 | | |
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| | | Fiona | Kids. I want to tell you something. |
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| | | Fiona | Tom is not okay. |
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| 核心互动-听力选择 | 第1题 — 【插入图】三张选项图（图A: apple + banana / 图B: kiwi + pineapple / 图C: grapes + watermelon），正确答案：图B | | |
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| | | May | Why is his face so red? |
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| | | Fiona | He ate some **fruit**. |
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| | | Fiona | His face turns red from **kiwi** or **pineapple**. |
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| | 第2题 — 【插入图】三张选项图（图A: 笑脸Tom / 图B: 脸红眼肿的Tom / 图C: 睡觉的Tom），正确答案：图B | | |
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| | | May | What happens to him? |
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| | | Fiona | His face turns red. |
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| | | Fiona | His eyes get puffy too. |
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| | 第3题 — 【插入图】三张选项图（图A: Tom很饿 / 图B: Tom很累 / 图C: Tom对食物过敏），正确答案：图C | | |
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| | | May | So he cannot eat **kiwi** or **pineapple**? |
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| | | Fiona | Yes. That is a food allergy. |
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| | | Fiona | Some **fruit** can make people sick. |
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| TL | Fiona 微笑，拍拍 User 和 May | | |
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| | | Fiona | You got it. |
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| | | Fiona | Look after Tom for me, okay? |
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| | Fiona 转身离开 | | |
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| | May 看着 User，眼神里全是问号 | | |
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| | | May | Wait. That is strange. |
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| | | May | Jack said Tom loves **pineapple**... |
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| | | May | Jack said Tom loves **kiwi** too. |
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| | | May | Why does he love them? |
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| | | May | They can make him sick! |
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| | ⚡收束钩子：User 看着 Tom 消失的方向。一个对 Kiwi 和 Pineapple 过敏的人，为什么全镇都以为他爱吃这两种水果？这个 Tom……到底是谁？ | | |
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## 自查
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**中互动含知识点：** ✅
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| 中互动 | 知识点 |
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| Tom did not eat the pineapple! | pineapple ✅ |
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| Sam's pineapple is the winner! | pineapple ✅ |
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**核心互动覆盖：** kiwi、pineapple、fruit → 3 个知识点 ✅
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**核心互动 3 轮听力：** Q1→Q2→Q3，每轮含 3 张选项图 + NPC 对话音频 ✅
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**NPC 最长句：** "Look after Tom for me, okay?"（7 词）✅
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**Fiona → 替换 Lily：** ✅
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**Lily 全部删除：** ✅
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**厕所捞人：** User 不去，Smith 代劳 ✅
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全课至此起承转合全部写完。你看。
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user: User Tom did not eat the pineapple! <<< 这个中互的桥段改一改。
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Smith 终于把 Tom 请回来。 User 问：What fruit does he like? Pineapple or Kiwi?
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这样句型 What fruit do/does you（he/she/it） like? 可以用多一次。
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assistant: 改这一处，Excel 重出。
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assistant: NO_REPLY
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user: 剧本已写好，task 已完结。
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assistant: 全课定稿已读回。现在关账。
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assistant: 已全部关账：
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- `task_log/U23-L2剧本.md` — 全课进度已记录
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- `active_tasks.md` — #6 U23-L2 标记完成，重复编号已修复
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- `memory/2026-05-25.md` — 完成记录已写入
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- `script_feedback_log.md` — 规则 #4 "中互动必须含知识点" 升级为高频错误
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U23-L2 起承转合全课收工。有 L3 大纲随时叫我。
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