# U23-L1「转」剧本 — Draft V1 > **接续点:** 承的最后一行(第159行)——圆球全消失,SaSa蹲原地,众人呆住。 > **场景:** Shop门外 → 公园内部(追踪路线)→ 公园角落 > **知识点目标:** pet ×1输出 / silly ×2输出 / I can't find ×1输出 > **中互动数量:** 3个 --- ## 剧本正文 | 类型 | 剧情描述 | 名字 | 台词 | 角色 | 台词润色 | |------|----------|------|------|------|----------| | TL | 【场景】Shop 门外。电视机还亮着雪花。小圆球全部消失。只有 SaSa 趴在原地,尾巴轻轻摇。 | | | | | | | | Nina | Where is WeWe! | | | | | | Jade | ViVi is gone too! | | | | | | May | DiDi! BoBo! | | | | | | Ben | They were here! | | | | | | Ben | Right in front of TV! | | | | | Marcus 蹲下来看 SaSa,SaSa 对他舔舔手。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | SaSa is fine. | | | | | | Nina | Why only SaSa is okay? | | | | | Marcus 挠了挠头,表情纠结。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | Because... | | | | | | Marcus | SaSa is not a robot. | | | | | 全场安静了两秒。 | | | | | | | | Ben | What? | | | | | | Marcus | SaSa is my pet dog. | | | | | | Marcus | I put a round coat on it. | | | | | 【emoji】emoji_shock | May | A dog!? | | | | | SaSa 站起来抖了抖,圆壳外套松了,露出毛耳朵。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | Sorry I lied. | | | | | | Marcus | I wanted to fit in. | | | | | | Ben | That's why it didn't watch TV! | | | | | | Marcus | Dogs can't see robot shows. | | | | 中互动 | | User | SaSa is not a robot. SaSa is a pet! | | | | TL | | Marcus | Yes... my pet dog. | | | | | | May | But Marcus! | | | | | | May | Can dogs find robots? | | | | | | Marcus | SaSa has a good nose. | | | | | | Marcus | She can smell BoBo! | | | | | SaSa 把鼻子贴地面,闻了闻——尾巴突然摇起来,朝公园方向跑。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | She got something! Follow! | | | | | 众人跟着 SaSa 跑进公园。 | | | | | | TL | 【场景】小圆球公园内部(复用起的公园地图) | | | | | | | SaSa 一路闻着地面跑,经过长椅、滑梯,然后——停在热狗摊前。 | | | | | | | SaSa 蹲下,盯着热狗摊流口水。尾巴疯狂摇摆。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | SaSa! No! | | | | | | Ben | Hahaha! | | | | | 【emoji】emoji_laugh | Ben | Silly SaSa! | | | | | | Nina | That dog is so silly! | | | | | 【emoji】emoji_nervous Marcus 脸红,拽 SaSa 的绳子。 | | | | | | | | Marcus | Come on SaSa! Not now! | | | | 中互动 | | User | SaSa is so silly! Don't eat now! | | | | TL | SaSa 被拽走,回头看了热狗摊一眼,恋恋不舍。 | | | | | | | SaSa 重新低头闻地面,这次认真了——加速朝公园角落跑。 | | | | | | | 众人跟着跑到公园边缘一片灌木后面。 | | | | | | | SaSa 停下,对着灌木后面汪了一声。 | | | | | | | | May | What's there? | | | | 中互动 | | User | I can't find the robots... Wait! Look! | | | | TL | 【镜头】灌木后面的空地上—— | | | | | | | Tony(假 Tom)站在中间,一群小圆球围着他。Tony 双手叉腰。 | | | | | | | | Tony | Freeze! | | | | | 所有小圆球瞬间一动不动——像真的玩"一二三木头人"。 | | | | | | | Tony 弯腰,把定住的圆球一个一个抱起来,放进一只大布袋。 | | | | | | | 圆球在袋子里也一动不动——它们还在遵守游戏规则。 | | | | | | | | Ben | Oh! They are playing Freeze! | | | | | | Nina | That looks fun! | | | | | | Ben | Haha so silly! | | | | | | Ben | The robots don't move at all! | | | | | Tony 把最后一只圆球塞进袋子,扛上肩膀。 | | | | | | | 他转身看到孩子们,愣了一秒——然后挤出微笑。 | | | | | | | | Tony | Oh! Hey kids! | | | | | | Tony | Just playing a game. | | | | | | Tony | The robots love Freeze! | | | | | 【emoji】emoji_smile Tony 拍了拍袋子,扛着走远了。 | | | | | | | 孩子们挥手。 | | | | | | | | Nina | Bye Mayor Tom! | | | | | 只有 User 站在原地,看着 Tony 的背影。 | | | | | | | 【镜头】Tony 扛着鼓鼓囊囊的袋子,走出公园大门。逆光剪影。 | | | | | | TL | 转完结。 | | | | | --- ## 知识点统计 | 知识点 | 出现 | 备注 | |--------|------|------| | pet (n) | 中互动1:User "SaSa is not a robot. SaSa is a pet!" | ✅ 输出×1 | | silly (adj) | 中互动2:User "SaSa is so silly!" + Ben/Nina台词双击 | ✅ 输出×1(User) + 输入×2(NPC) | | I can't find | 中互动3:User "I can't find the robots..." | ✅ 输出×1 | ## 设计说明 1. **知识点输入→输出顺序:** 每个中互动前都有NPC先引入语境 - pet:Marcus 先说 "SaSa is my pet dog"(输入)→ User 输出 - silly:Ben 先喊 "Silly SaSa!"(输入)→ User 输出 - I can't find:May 问 "What's there?"引导搜索语境 → User 输出 2. **NPC单句词数:** 最长 "I put a round coat on it." = 7词 ✅ 3. **Freeze游戏双层叙事:** 孩子看到游戏+搞笑,观众看到阴谋 4. **最后一帧:** Tony逆光剪影扛袋离开——视觉悬念